Sunday, August 31, 2008

Auditions: Change of plans

Previous parts:
Placing the ad

Originally, I had planned to limit the “Auditions” story to three parts (and I even set dates for these parts to be published). I have started writing the first one and I realized that it would become a huge (and I mean huge) story, because I had eight guys fighting against each other in it. That doesn’t work.

And since you seem to be pretty fond of the “One on one” stories, I decided to split the story up into smaller parts. I’m going to present the guys to you in two expository segments (that will include very little – if any – ballbusting). After that, the guys will fight each other one on one until a winner is determined.

As for the guys: If you have any suggestions, please let me know.

I’m going to be away for a couple of days, so I will not be able to answer to your comments right away, but feel free to tell me your suggestions in the comments section.

This is what we have so far:
- an arrogant rich boy (Xander)
- a surfer with large feet (Ian)
- a street fighter (Nestor)
- a guy with a hairy chest and a thing for going for his opponent’s nipples (Dean)
- a German guy (Max)

Please tell me your ideas and I’ll make sure to include them into the story!

Note that it's going to be a knock-out-competition, so most of the guys will only have one fight... (With 16 guys, there'll be quite a bunch of stories. Some will be shorter, some longer, and I might get three or four people in one story. We'll see... I hope I'll be able to finish them all in September, October and November without forgetting the other stories... :-))


Anonymous said...

AWSOME! it's like a tournament.
I also have some sugestions for the other, "contestants".

1. A short Irish guy.

2. A very serious, quiet, guy. (like, border emotionless, not mean or shy)

3. A feminie blonde. (not too femine, just obvious that he's gay)

4. A hairy middle-eastern

5. An 18-year-old High School Senior.

Thats all I got.

Anonymous said...

I love the idea of a ahort, red-haired Irsh guy.

Anonymous said...

Ah! Ian! I love it! Hopefully he'll be a real california guy! XD

But, now, I shall suggest someone... who has no... affinity... to feet...

I know, out of character, huh? ^^

I suggest a guy who fancies himself as quite the comedian. The kinda guy who isn't amazingly attractive, nor amazingly endowed or buff. I'm sure loads of puns/knock-knock jokes/stuff like that could come into play during a ballbusting session... :P

Anonymous said...

Cant wait to see Dean go after a red haired Irish guy's nips. Then see him get his nips torn up by the Irish guy!

Anonymous said...

How bout a highschool wrestler that knows all kinds of ball crushing moves. He's also had all of em done to him and kinda likes it!

Anonymous said...

The streetfighter Nestor could maybe be a gipsy. Very tanned, unkept hair and tatty clothes. Height about 5'9 and tears in his clothes that reveal his hard muscular body. Obviously he's an experienced and dirty fighter amd maybe knows a few boxing moves.
Self confident and unafraid of anyone. Maybe, to avoid negative stereotypes, he could be a nice guy that has fallen on bad times...just don't piss him off !

Alex said...

Thanks for all your comments! I've taken your suggestions and I hope you'll be happy with the results...

@ the guy who suggested Nestor be a gypsy: I had already finished the story with Nestor and I'm gonna stick with him being a Latino.
But there will be a gypsy in the group: Milosh...