Due to popular demand, Ben will defeat David in this story. I consider this (and the Tables turned part of the Brother knows best
story which was posted a couple of weeks ago) a “one-off”, i.e. it
won’t affect David’s behaviour. Even he is defeated in these stories, he
will remain the arrogant asshole he has been since the beginning…
Featured in this story: Ben, David and Alex (click for pictures)
Ben was sitting on the couch. The 20 year old jock was listening to some music on his iPod. He was wearing sweat pants and a t-shirt and he looked like he had just finished his daily work-out. His black hair was wet and he smelled of shower gel. He ran his hand through his hair and watched David pace the room.
Featured in this story: Ben, David and Alex (click for pictures)
Ben was sitting on the couch. The 20 year old jock was listening to some music on his iPod. He was wearing sweat pants and a t-shirt and he looked like he had just finished his daily work-out. His black hair was wet and he smelled of shower gel. He ran his hand through his hair and watched David pace the room.
The attractive dancer was one year younger than Ben. He had the same pitch black hair and looked like he was a bit nervous. He was a professional dancer, and his body was pretty muscular, especially his legs. But he had a more delicate body than Ben’s trained, buff frame.
“When are we gonna start?” David said impatiently. “I can’t wait to kick his ass…”
Chad and I were fixing a problem with the camera.
Ben watched his opponent with an amused expression on his face. “You’re pretty sure you are going to win, huh?”
David turned around and looked Ben over, smirking. “Sure. I never lose.”
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9 comments:
One of my favorite stories on this site. I love cocky, badass boys getting their nuts busted. Ben and David are both asking to be brought to their knees and this story and the follow-ups don't disappoint! Awesome! P.s. still hoping for a Kev vs Ben story sometime soon ��
Thanks for your feedback! I‘ll see what I can do about a Kev vs. Ben story. :-))
How about something new instead of Ben getting busted all the time? i said it before that they're overdone and uninspired and I will keep saying it.
They're so boring, that even I, who started my love for ballbusting because I love seeing cocky person busted, am now tired of this copy and paste formula.
Cocky, badass boys getting defeated is NOT a subversion anymore. They're expected. I really wish for something that break the mold.
I love your story, Alex. I'm not saying this dynamic should not be done. I just wish there're more variety. Please, consider branching out more. Bully wins. Manly, cocky boy wins. Jock wins. And not just they win to set up their defeat later; actual wins.
Especially Ben and Logan. They absolutely need to be on the winning side more. I know it's scary writing something new but I'm starving for a different story.
I agree.
It would be fun to have Logan or Ben absolutely TRASH Danny.
You know, have Danny turn up to take someone on, but while he’s needed, only one of David and Ben/Logan should be there.
Danny decides he’s had enough of losing to David, so picks Logan/Ben, and they completely destroy Danny. Actually busting him to the point where he thinks David would have been a better pick (maybe they’d been hoping to catch a bus or train to see a girl that evening, but Danny was late and then chose them so they missed it).
ScotLad
Well i think we all agree that variety is good and that is what is awesome about Alex and this site.
It's just great that Alex will listen to our voices and ideas and turn them into amazing stories.
Personally i am more turned on by cocky guys getting humiliated and busted, and i find one-sided maulings rather boring. Each to his own i guess. However i fully agree that guys like Ben, David and even Zach need a few good wins from time to time to keep their egos intact.
For the Kev vs Ben story there are some great suggestions in the One-on-one wish list. I actually like the idea of Ben winning or at least claiming a draw, i just hope that he suffers a little humiliation along the way, including a reminder that his balls are not always the biggest in the room. Ben's ego always revovers from any knocks, but a win over his nemesis (Kev) might be his greatest triumph.
Anyway here is my big thumbs up to variety!
Keep up the great work, Alex.
Reg
Oh you’re right, variety is key.
And we are spoiled by Alex.
I personally like the odd subversion (with Zach pulling off a win)
The odd humiliating beat down (could have the Ben/Logan thumping Danny or Leo)
And the balanced fights (I love the Kev & Logan story, despite wishing there had been a winner).
I would love to see a confrontation between Ben and Kev too, not just a rigged match.
ScotLad
Thanks for your comments and your support, guys! I'll continue trying to come up with interesting stories, and I hope you'll enjoy them! :-))
Alex, your stories are amazing. All readers have slightly different tastes and it's amazing that you can accomodate so many.
Feedback is always a good thing even when critical ��
Keep up the great work!
Reg
Thanks for your comment, Reg! I agree 100%, and I can‘t tell you how much my readers' feedback means to me, positive or negative. I consider myself extremely lucky to have this kind of interaction with my readers. It‘s a writer‘s dream, and it is why this blog is so alive! I appreciate every reader‘s opinion, and I am very grateful for every single comment and every single email that I get. I mean it: Thank you all for your comments and your support! :-))
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