Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Summer in the city: Your opinion

Yesterday, I published the last part of the "Summer in the city" series. As always, I'm very interested in your opinion. Which parts did you like? Which parts did you hate? What would you have liked better?

Any feedback is appreciated.

P.S.: I'm really very thankful for all the feedback that you give me all the time, the comments and the emails, the suggestions and the new ideas. It's really fun and I enjoy writing stories for you!

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

To be honest this and the "Ball Doctor" are my least favourite series (nearly all your stories are great, I'm just talking about preference!!!). I prefer the stories where 2 or more guys are "competing" against each other, either in a fight (one-on-one) or in a challenge (Olympics / Soccer-Balls).
For the Soccer-Balls story I hope to see some competition between the guys getting kicked, as well as the kickers. Who is on their knees after a 7? who is still standing after a 9? Can anyone handle a 10? etc.

Alex said...

Thanks for your feedback! That "Soccer balls 2" idea is brilliant! I've been thinking about a way to make the new story significantly different than "Soccer balls 1" - and that's it! Perfect!

Chris said...

I liked them. Lotsa feet, XD.

I must admit, the dominance side didn't appear too much, but the foot action was uber good! ^^

Hopefully whoever wins the Special Guest Star thing *cough*ZacEfron!*cough* has some fun getting guys to smell his feet... :P

Alex said...

Thanks, Chris! I must admit that I'm not sure yet what I'll do with Zac Efron in the "Special Guest Star" story. Hmmm. I'll think about it... :-)

Anonymous said...

Gotta say, the final Summer in the City was in my opinion the best. The use of props is always great in my opinion.. the drum sticks -- very inventive. Would've loved to see something done with a guitar, but the setting alone was enough to be fantastic.

Have you considered doing a ballbusting Halloween special yet? A lot could be done with the costumes, the props and the like.

Anonymous said...

lol, the feet thing you might want to stray AWAY from, but can't wait to see the Celeb story.
(I never liked that guy as an actor, but he's SOOOOO hot.)

FistBump said...

a great way to go with the celeb story, have someone who hates his carrer (but secretly thinks he;s hot) bust him, instead of having starstruck people.
(and i have to agree, Disney sucks, but Zac's hot!)

Alex said...

Thanks for your comments!

@ anonymous (1):
A Halloween special sounds fun. I'll think about it!

@ anonymous (2):
I don't know about the feet thing, yet...

@ anonymous (3):
That's perfect! Thanks! I'll do just that. Any suggestions as to who should be co-starring?
I was thinking David maybe? As a dancer, he might be jealous of Zac's success. And Danny who likes Zac and tries to protect him. Maybe Zac is an asshole himself and goes for Danny and teams up with David? Any thoughts?

Anonymous said...

Might be nice to see Zach vs. Zac. I like the idea about a fan trying to protect a hater. Zach should be the hater, and I think the fan should be Danny. (He's the only one I can see being a fan)

Anonymous said...

It would be good for David to have a friend...he seems a bit lonely !
David and Zac would be great team. Successful, arrogant, similar build, hot! For sure David will not be star-struck, but they're both successful "artists" so maybe some mutual respect.

Alex said...

Thanks for your help!
Okay, so it comes down to Danny and David (on the same side for once, but for different reasons) protecting Zac from "hater" Zach.
I think Zach should have at least one ally when he is fighting against three guys... Do you have any preferences? Maybe Kev and Ben? That could be quite a team...
Also, I think that the atmosphere won't be hateful right from the beginning. I think I'm gonna go with evolving tension... :-)

Anonymous said...

1 vote for Kev and Ben !!!
The Ben / David rivalry is great and this will feed the Zach / David rivalry. Great stuff.
Please can we have another David story soon?

Alex said...

How's this for "soon": The 3rd "One on one" match between David and Ben is due for the day after tomorrow. Then there'll be the "One on one" story with David, Danny and the twins on September 12th. And the "One on one" rematch between Zach and David is coming a few days after that. :-)

Anonymous said...

GREAT. Thanks

Alex said...

You're welcome! :-))