Saturday, July 12, 2008

Sammy the ball doctor - hot or not?

Since March I have written and published 4 episodes for "Sammy the ball doctor". I thought that it was a nice idea to have some kind of role play series. But since I have received no feedback at all - neither positive nor negative (which is quite unusual) - I don't know whether you'd like me to continue with those stories.

Please tell me your opinion, because I'd rather spend my time writing stories that you want to read instead of producing stuff that nobody cares about... :-)

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Not my favourite series. Too submissive. I prefer stories with a challenge (e.g. who is toughest) or a touch of aggression with opportunity for revenge (e.g. one-on-one). Other stories are great though!

Alex said...

I see. Yeah, that makes sense. Thanks for your feedback!

Anonymous said...

I agree with the first anonymous. There isn't too much appeal in the 'doctor' idea.

The others, like the 'One-on-One' series and the 'Summer in the City' ones, however, are brilliant, and appeal to a wide variety of people.

Kepp up the excellent work!

Alex said...

Okay, maybe I'll stop the series and concentrate on the other stories. I'm glad you like the "One on one" and the "Summer in the city" stories. There are a bunch of hot stories still to come within the next weeks...

Oh, do you think there might be another setting for role play stories that might work better? Or do you think the whole "role play" idea is bad?

Thanks for taking the time to leave feeback!

Anonymous said...

OK, I'll serve as the dissenting opinion. I think this thread is great and shouldn't be stopped. I like all the stories, but the scenarios as to why the guys need to go to the doctor (and the eventual remedy) is brilliant. Please keep this story line going and keep up the good work!

Alex said...

Thanks, bbmal10, for your opinion! It's nice to hear someone from who likes the series! I'll think it.

Anonymous said...

Personally, Im not a very big fan of Sammy the Ball doctor. It could be because Sammy is not really my favorite character, or it could be because stories just seem a little boring compared to the other stories. I really love your work, but Id prefer something like a game or contest you've set up. And the one on one matchs are amazing. :)

I think you could keep the role play idea, but instead of just a doctor, why not try different things with different characters? That could turn out to be really hot. Just an idea, but I think Kev as the coach who pushes to hard, or Danny as the sexy office worker with a wild side, might be really good. Role play is good, I just think you should mix and match a little more.

Thanks again for everything! :)

Anonymous said...

I agree with thw anonymous guys - stories dealing with Fights and Challenges are much hotter ;-)

Thx for your cool site!

Alex

Anonymous said...

Keep Sammy ... The theme of Sammy the Ball Doctor is great, but the guys are a little too submissive as compared to their roles in other stories ... Maybe a little restraining is in order to assist them with just having to take it. Plus, I think Chad needs a follow-up appointment ... and Zach ... Good grief! His treatment at the hands of Sammy is ... YUM ... I bet Sammy could have lots of loads out of Zach! :-)

Alex said...

Thanks for your detailed feedback!

@ anonymous (1):
Those ideas are great. Maybe I'll start a "Role play" series with some of those ideas.

@ anonymous (2):
There will be lots of fights and challenges, for example in the "One on one series", in "Soccer balls 2", and in a couple of new story that I'm thinking about at the moment...

@ anonymous (3):
I'll use your suggestions in the next instalment of "Sammy the ball doctor". I think it will be Zach's turn to have an appointment...
And maybe I'll get Chad to make a follow-up appointment, too...

Anonymous said...

I like Sammy the ball doctor... but, since he clearly likes doing the "Healing," how bout you let him get off on it?

Alex said...

Thanks! Great idea! I'm gonna include tht in one of the next instalments!