tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post8881828464821412319..comments2024-03-27T14:15:47.847+01:00Comments on Ballbusting Boys: Ben’s wrestling match – the rematchAlexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-38821277767554724762014-10-18T15:56:58.169+02:002014-10-18T15:56:58.169+02:00Thank you, Carter! :-)Thank you, Carter! :-)Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-70395284243533115542014-10-18T07:28:30.730+02:002014-10-18T07:28:30.730+02:00That was awesome, loved the roshamho part.That was awesome, loved the roshamho part.Carternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-46773539436920578152008-12-01T18:37:00.000+01:002008-12-01T18:37:00.000+01:00Thanks for your feedback - that ending is just for...Thanks for your feedback - that ending is just for you ;-)Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-24084118995977378162008-12-01T10:58:00.000+01:002008-12-01T10:58:00.000+01:00Awesome new ending. Now it's a great story start t...Awesome new ending. Now it's a great story start to finish !!!<BR/>Maybe you should advertise the change so that more readers can appreciate it.<BR/>Thanks !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-58814735564115434832008-11-29T15:36:00.000+01:002008-11-29T15:36:00.000+01:00Thanks for your feedback!@ bbmal:I like the idea o...Thanks for your feedback!<BR/><BR/>@ bbmal:<BR/>I like the idea of having Cindy appear again. Do you have any idea for a story involving her and Ben and Kev? She could spice things up a bit...<BR/><BR/>@ anoymous:<BR/>I have rewritten the Roshambo part including your ideas. Usually, I don't like going back to stories that are finished. (I guess I could go on and on reworking parts that I don't Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-20743165712396578182008-11-29T00:23:00.000+01:002008-11-29T00:23:00.000+01:00I didn't much care for the F/M part, but we must a...I didn't much care for the F/M part, but we must all accept eachother's likes and dislikes: no-one has complained about my fetish, so I shall do the same~ ^^<BR/><BR/>It was a very good story. I like how the characters bounce off eachother, are clearly straight, but are VERY open with eachother. Excellent! ^^Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12218190425711394178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-25113546176661511042008-11-28T19:00:00.001+01:002008-11-28T19:00:00.001+01:00Wow..would you really consider rewriting the Rosha...Wow..would you really consider rewriting the Roshambo part ? <BR/>Here's how I would have done it : there would only be about 5 kicks each before Ben is defeated. Colin would commentate on some of the action and work up the crowd ! <BR/>I would try to express the determination of each fighter to win and the competitiveness between them.<BR/>The crowd would continue chanting "Balls of steel" each Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-51550282964887003052008-11-28T17:32:00.000+01:002008-11-28T17:32:00.000+01:00Fantastic, amazing, great job Alex! The f/m twis...Fantastic, amazing, great job Alex! The f/m twist at the end was great! I especially like that we don't know exactly what Cindy said to Ben, but his reaction is great! Ben and Kev are two of my favorite characters, and I would love to see more of Cindy (or at least have them refer to her . . . prior to or after their bb activities!)<BR/><BR/>I know you were a little worried about everyone's Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-33099841670865924422008-11-28T15:52:00.000+01:002008-11-28T15:52:00.000+01:00Thanks for your suggestion! One the one hand that ...Thanks for your suggestion! One the one hand that is a very generous offer. On the other hand I wouldn't want to put myself into a position where I might have to reject your effort if I thought that it might not blend in with the rest of the story... I hope you understand that. So I'll see if I can rewrite that part of the story myself on the weekend, okay? <BR/>Thanks again for your offer. I Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-82190573259541908262008-11-28T15:42:00.000+01:002008-11-28T15:42:00.000+01:00I appreciate that you take criticism so well.If I ...I appreciate that you take criticism so well.<BR/>If I ever find the time I could modify the Roshambo section as I imagined it and post as a comment. I don't want to dilute your site with inferior writing or risk distorting the great characters you created !!!<BR/>Let me know what you think. You're the boss !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-39423530917357806862008-11-28T14:59:00.000+01:002008-11-28T14:59:00.000+01:00Thanks for your feedback! @ anonymous (3):Thanks f...Thanks for your feedback! <BR/><BR/>@ anonymous (3):<BR/>Thanks for your advice. I know what you mean. The story was running a bit long, so I decided to cut the Roshambo part a bit long... I'll try to avoid that... :-)))Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-10723441833247034512008-11-28T12:30:00.000+01:002008-11-28T12:30:00.000+01:00Good story. Thanks !One small recommendation : the...Good story. Thanks !<BR/>One small recommendation : the Roshambo part would be more exciting if each kick and the resulting reaction is described, instead of "after a dozen more kicks" etc. Ben's humiliation did not really come across.<BR/>I thought the Roshambo worked better in the BB Olympics, where only 3 or 4 kicks were exchanged but each was carefully described. Also I think it's unrealisticAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-87158611876419492422008-11-28T08:50:00.000+01:002008-11-28T08:50:00.000+01:00Really hot story. Nice addition of the girl at the...Really hot story. Nice addition of the girl at the end, nothing to much but enough to satisfiy. :) Love to read about muscle men destroying each other.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-58217252875299741042008-11-27T19:44:00.000+01:002008-11-27T19:44:00.000+01:00brilliantbrilliantAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com