tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post6528335164932414527..comments2024-03-27T14:15:47.847+01:00Comments on Ballbusting Boys: The B Factor - Season 2: Sack tap casualty (Elimination #5)Alexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-48566765408775169912020-11-08T13:35:47.460+01:002020-11-08T13:35:47.460+01:00Thanks for your comment! For various reasons this ...Thanks for your comment! For various reasons this story turned out the way it did. I understand your point, and I'll try to do better in the future. In the meantime: I really like your plot idea, and I would love to read that story. If you feel like writing it do not hesitate to send it to me (alex@ballbustingboys.org), and I'll gladly publish it! :-))Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-41190536639516552122020-11-08T04:12:11.594+01:002020-11-08T04:12:11.594+01:00Honestly, I thought it would have been better if y...Honestly, I thought it would have been better if you showed the actual permanent damage other than just implying it and showing us the aftermath <br /><br />Something more like show and don't tell<br /><br />If you are already writing about how Chris Pratt's Dino eggs got scrambled you might as well show write the whole thing happening <br /><br />Maybe Chris Pratt was filming the third Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-5756646724114453162020-11-07T11:36:20.659+01:002020-11-07T11:36:20.659+01:00Thanks for your comment, Jimmy! :-))Thanks for your comment, Jimmy! :-))Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-49728339495255204142020-11-04T22:52:56.024+01:002020-11-04T22:52:56.024+01:00I'm so happy that this was short, he did not d...I'm so happy that this was short, he did not deserve more. It was great in how definitive of an ending he got. Well done!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />JimmyGinoJaydenAuthorJimmyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729620475394819316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-15481821169929732632020-11-04T15:52:24.077+01:002020-11-04T15:52:24.077+01:00Thanks for your feedback, guys! :-))Thanks for your feedback, guys! :-))Alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09680695403921899260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-88906427513723655862020-11-03T15:58:12.060+01:002020-11-03T15:58:12.060+01:00This seems like a good compromise, well done. This seems like a good compromise, well done. Chadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01453788955097152882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7108853281243947863.post-34055727814063607242020-11-03T14:54:32.518+01:002020-11-03T14:54:32.518+01:00I think that would be great to read the moment whe...I think that would be great to read the moment when the balls were destroyed, because a story about after that moment isn't so well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com